By the end of the afternoon, all four groups has completed their front pages. Mrs Bell went to the office and Mrs Kirkpatrick kindly printed them off in colour. Now the difficult task is choosing the winner.
ALL the work is brilliant - the two news stories show the higher skills in writing. BUT WHICH GROUP worked the best as a TEAM. This has to be taken into account! Mrs Bell asked her son's opinion and he chose Klaudia's group. "Oh.....!" moaned Mrs Bell, "but they argued so much!" She will have to discuss this with Miss Akhtar.
4 comments:
Hello,Mrs Bell
i can't wait for the cinema i hope you are aloud to bring some cokeinto school to enjoy.I also can't wait to see who are the winners of the newspaper i think the prize will be amazing even though i am not to sure what it is
hope the winners will be proud of themselves.
from Anum
p.s I have tried to put in my punctuation.
Hi, Anum, I have just been to the Co-op to buy some coke - I am sure we are entitled to a treat now and again. Good try with punctuation but you needed a full stop after newspaper and is. We must sort that out for you before you leave Victoria - you have such a good writing style, it would be a shame to let punctuation affect it.
hi mrs bell it was cool at abbott byene i liked it alot! i cannot wait for the first day and after september
hannah
hi mrs bell i am really wishing that we come to the finals
hannah
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